The Friends-To-Lovers Fix

September 5
35 mins

Episode Description

There are three different types of personal conflict your romance book can showcase between your lead characters. And you might be accidentally making important decisions about your PLOT. Because if you don't give EACH of these three types its own unique external hook, your story might feel flat through the middle.

Inside, I share an example of one of these romance arc types—straight from a published book!—and how understanding the character push-pull it creates can prevent a saggy middle plot problem in a Friends-To-Lovers story. Then, I explain what each of the three relationship conflicts is and how to hook them into the external plot in a romance manuscript.

SPOILER WARNING: This episode reveals major moments in the book Hot Axe by May Archer. So if you hate spoilers and love reading May Archer, go buy Hot Axe first.

You'll learn:

  • Why each of your leads is determined to stay just friends, and why neither one will make a move without plot help
  • Three different ways their self-protections can enable and conflict with one another, and how each one needs a different type of external event to earn the HEA
  • How to use the Friends-To-Lovers example from a real book to map out what your own lovers need in their story (even if you're writing a different trope!)
  • Two super simple do-it-yourself questions that will test whether your romance arc is stuck in a rut mid-manuscript

This 35-minute episode is for romance writers who can feel that something is off with your story even though all the romance beats hit just where they should.

By the end, you'll learn a new technique for diagnosing where the problem might be by asking two deceptively deep questions that can inspire the right fix for your own manuscript today.

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