The Inciting Incident Isn’t Big. It’s Binding.

Nov 26, 2025
12 mins

Episode Description

If your opening goes boom but your hero can shrug and carry on, that’s fireworks, not story. In this episode I breaks down the real job of an inciting incident - to bind your protagonist to an obligation that costs something now and points the story arrow.

Here's what you'll learn:

  • What “binding” means in plain English and how to spot it fast
  • The five ways a moment can stick Bond, Irreversibility, New stakes, Direction, Pressure
  • A spoken mini-exercise you can even do while walking the dog
  • A quick diagnostic to fix fake incidents that are loud but optional
  • A simple before and after that turns a limp delivery into a clock-ticking crisis

We'll also look at:

  • Pride and Prejudice Darcy’s slight and Lizzy’s promise to herself
  • Legally Blonde Elle’s public vow to Harvard Law
  • A Streetcar Named Desire Blanche’s choice to stay and conceal

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